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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! 22:57 - Mar 15 with 3174 viewsdannywiseman123

Hi all, it's been a while, I hope your all well and somewhat happy. Well I'm back with my radio advert I made for my college. I thought you might want to give it a listen and maybe give me your thoughts on this advert as I can use it for my college course.
Any feedback is appreciated as always.
UP THE DALE!!!!!

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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:12 - Mar 15 with 3140 viewsBigDaveMyCock

Danny, good effort.

If you don't mind, it lacks a bit of punch. It doesn't grab you. I can't offer any real practical advice other than watch this clip by a band called the MC5. They were well, well before their time. However, the first 20 seconds or so are a great example of grabbing someone's attention.

Enjoy


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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:15 - Mar 15 with 3135 viewsBigDaveMyCock

Go watch the Dale motherf.....

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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:16 - Mar 15 with 3134 viewsdannywiseman123

My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:12 - Mar 15 by BigDaveMyCock

Danny, good effort.

If you don't mind, it lacks a bit of punch. It doesn't grab you. I can't offer any real practical advice other than watch this clip by a band called the MC5. They were well, well before their time. However, the first 20 seconds or so are a great example of grabbing someone's attention.

Enjoy



Thank you so much mate for the advice! Yes I can see what you mean, that song really wakes you up
Thanks for the feedback mate!
UTD
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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:17 - Mar 15 with 3132 viewsdannywiseman123

My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:15 - Mar 15 by BigDaveMyCock

Go watch the Dale motherf.....


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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:29 - Mar 15 with 3106 viewsBigDaveMyCock

My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:16 - Mar 15 by dannywiseman123

Thank you so much mate for the advice! Yes I can see what you mean, that song really wakes you up
Thanks for the feedback mate!
UTD


Danny, pleasure.

More of the same. Watch from around 30 seconds to 50 seconds.

Get off your behind.



I should add that the I am a Dale fan song was fooking awful btw.
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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:33 - Mar 15 with 3101 viewsdannywiseman123

My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:29 - Mar 15 by BigDaveMyCock

Danny, pleasure.

More of the same. Watch from around 30 seconds to 50 seconds.

Get off your behind.



I should add that the I am a Dale fan song was fooking awful btw.
[Post edited 15 Mar 2017 23:32]


Thanks mate for leaving more advice/examples means a lot mate!
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