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Hi all, it's been a while, I hope your all well and somewhat happy. Well I'm back with my radio advert I made for my college. I thought you might want to give it a listen and maybe give me your thoughts on this advert as I can use it for my college course. Any feedback is appreciated as always. UP THE DALE!!!!!
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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:12 - Mar 15 with 3156 views
If you don't mind, it lacks a bit of punch. It doesn't grab you. I can't offer any real practical advice other than watch this clip by a band called the MC5. They were well, well before their time. However, the first 20 seconds or so are a great example of grabbing someone's attention.
My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:12 - Mar 15 by BigDaveMyCock
Danny, good effort.
If you don't mind, it lacks a bit of punch. It doesn't grab you. I can't offer any real practical advice other than watch this clip by a band called the MC5. They were well, well before their time. However, the first 20 seconds or so are a great example of grabbing someone's attention.
Enjoy
Thank you so much mate for the advice! Yes I can see what you mean, that song really wakes you up Thanks for the feedback mate! UTD
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My Rochdale Afc Radio Advert! on 23:17 - Mar 15 with 3148 views
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